tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4662825720404073899.post681092322079891026..comments2023-09-11T02:58:56.542-07:00Comments on Biscuit City: The Biscuit City Exceptionally Immodest Poetry Series Presents a Poem by Dan Verner, Who Has No ShameDanhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12794467539386678686noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4662825720404073899.post-32223302045687076502012-05-07T11:55:08.165-07:002012-05-07T11:55:08.165-07:00I agree that the last three stanzas are the best. ...I agree that the last three stanzas are the best. They also have the most universal meaning, of course, so would "speak" to more people. I agree, however, that it is just a thought. <br />BUT I DO LIKE IT AS-IS as well!<br />It takes courage to "put them out here" Dan - keep it up!marykayhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16080378966303179440noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4662825720404073899.post-7291504216727818912012-05-04T07:44:38.254-07:002012-05-04T07:44:38.254-07:00Take this or leave it as you wish, but I think thi...Take this or leave it as you wish, but I think this would be an even better poem if you pared it down to the last three or four paragraphs. Just a thought.l8leighhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04838279688366167035noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4662825720404073899.post-40055884439263990352012-05-04T04:21:57.050-07:002012-05-04T04:21:57.050-07:00So good to see you being immodest, Dan, though I h...So good to see you being immodest, Dan, though I have to say, when I glanced at the title of this post, I was expecting something risque. Ah, words and their varied meanings...Katherinehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17474979590755071985noreply@blogger.com